0013861: Solar map explanation could be better

ID	Project	Category		Date Submitted	Last Update

0013861	The Last Federation	Suggestion		Apr 12, 2014 3:03 pm	Apr 12, 2014 3:06 pm

Reporter	Enrymion	Assigned To
Status	new	Resolution	open
Product Version	0.856 (Documented Actions/Deals!)

Summary	0013861: Solar map explanation could be better
Description	There were various things I didn't like with it(mainly why tell me not to worry about federation and then tell me to start doing things that I'd need to do anyway to make the federation) So I edited it a little and I think this or something similar would be much better(I couldn't find the color code for peltians or skylaxians): I'm going to introduce you to this gradually. For now, a lot of detailed stats and stuff is hidden. Before you can even start forming the federation you'll need some [#b38dff]Credit[#ffffff] and enough [#b38dff]Influence[#ffffff] with a few races. A humble suggestion is to get started on both by doing the friendly act of [#b38dff]delivering spacefaring tech[#ffffff] to the Skylaxians, [#fb9702]Andors[#ffffff], and/or Peltians, and then run some [#b38dff]dispatch missions[#ffffff] for them to gain more credit. If you want to read this (or any other) message again, just click [#b38dff]Your Logbook[#ffffff].
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Date Modified	Username	Field	Change
Apr 12, 2014 3:03 pm	Enrymion	New Issue
Apr 12, 2014 3:03 pm	Enrymion	File Added: solarmapintro.jpg
Apr 12, 2014 3:06 pm	Enrymion	Note Added: 0035838
Apr 14, 2014 9:28 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Category	Suggestion - General Idea => Suggestion - General
Apr 14, 2014 9:30 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Category	Suggestion - General => Suggestion

Enrymion Apr 12, 2014 3:03 pm reporter	solarmapintro.jpg (80,040 bytes) solarmapintro.jpg (80,040 bytes)

Enrymion Apr 12, 2014 3:06 pm reporter ~0035838	Though I'm not sure about the "Before you can even start forming the federation" part, maybe "In order to create the federation" would be better