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| ID | Project | Category | Date Submitted | Last Update | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0005155 | AI War 1 / Classic | GUI | Nov 9, 2011 2:35 pm | Nov 10, 2011 9:15 am | |
| Reporter | doctorfrog | Assigned To | keith.lamothe | ||
| Status | assigned | Resolution | open | ||
| Product Version | 5.020 | ||||
| Summary | 0005155: Capitalization -- Dyson Gatling description | ||||
| Description | These oversized, automated alien ships fire lightning-fast energy bursts at long range. Depending on the mood of the dyson sphere when these are created, they may attack everyone, AIs only, or humans only. Neutral and Player-Ally Dyson Gatlings cannot shoot at Mark V targets, and do not attack AI targets that could free AI ships (guard posts, command stations, etc). "dyson sphere" -> "Dyson Sphere" (second sentence) This description could use a little polish. Suggested rewrite: "These large, automated alien ships fire lightning-fast energy bursts at long range. They adopt the temperament of the parent Dyson Sphere as they are created, and may attack AI ships, human ships, or everybody. Neutral and human-controlled Dyson Gatlings cannot fire upon Mark V targets, and will not attack AI targets that may release AI ships (Guard Posts, Command Stations, etc.)" (Three instances of this in the data dump.) | ||||
| Tags | No tags attached. | ||||
| Internal Weight | Typo | ||||
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I like the rewrite. I believe there should be a comma after automated in the rewrite: "These large, automated, alien ships fire lightning-fast energy bursts..." |
| Date Modified | Username | Field | Change |
|---|---|---|---|
| Nov 9, 2011 2:35 pm | doctorfrog | New Issue | |
| Nov 9, 2011 3:34 pm | Hearteater | Note Added: 0017477 | |
| Nov 10, 2011 9:15 am | tigersfan | Internal Weight | => Typo |
| Nov 10, 2011 9:15 am | tigersfan | Assigned To | => keith.lamothe |
| Nov 10, 2011 9:15 am | tigersfan | Status | new => assigned |
| Apr 14, 2014 9:28 am | Chris_McElligottPark | Category | Bug - UI => GUI |
