0013813: Intro Text Phrasing

ID	Project	Category		Date Submitted	Last Update

0013813	The Last Federation	Suggestion		Apr 11, 2014 10:57 pm	Apr 14, 2014 10:23 am

Reporter	rallythelegions	Assigned To	Chris_McElligottPark
Status	resolved	Resolution	fixed
Product Version	0.856 (Documented Actions/Deals!)
Fixed in Version	0.862 (Combat And Tutorial Tweaks)

Summary	0013813: Intro Text Phrasing
Description	The opening intro is written in the first person, which is a little confusing since the first picture is that of a sea serpent (not something I usually associate with a player character). It took me till the game zoomed in on my ship to remember that y'all had mentioned in one of the development posts that the player is the member of the dictatorial race. I love the story of the set up, but I think it might be a little more clear if the intro was written in the second person rather than the first person. That way new players who may not have followed the development will be clear on their backstory. They will be certain that the intro is their story, and not someone talking to them.
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Internal Weight	New

Date Modified	Username	Field	Change
Apr 11, 2014 10:57 pm	rallythelegions	New Issue
Apr 14, 2014 9:28 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Category	Suggestion - General Idea => Suggestion - General
Apr 14, 2014 9:30 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Category	Suggestion - General => Suggestion
Apr 14, 2014 10:23 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Internal Weight	=> New
Apr 14, 2014 10:23 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Note Added: 0035993
Apr 14, 2014 10:23 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Status	new => resolved
Apr 14, 2014 10:23 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Fixed in Version	=> 0.862 (Combat And Tutorial Tweaks)
Apr 14, 2014 10:23 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Resolution	open => fixed
Apr 14, 2014 10:23 am	Chris_McElligottPark	Assigned To	=> Chris_McElligottPark

Chris_McElligottPark Apr 14, 2014 10:23 am administrator ~0035993	Thanks! * Added some clarity in the intro story text that the hydral speaking in the first person is YOU.