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0013861The Last FederationSuggestionApr 12, 2014 3:06 pm
ReporterEnrymion Assigned To 
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Product Version0.856 (Documented Actions/Deals!) 
Summary0013861: Solar map explanation could be better
DescriptionThere were various things I didn't like with it(mainly why tell me not to worry about federation and then tell me to start doing things that I'd need to do anyway to make the federation)

So I edited it a little and I think this or something similar would be much better(I couldn't find the color code for peltians or skylaxians):
I'm going to introduce you to this gradually. For now, a lot of detailed stats and stuff is hidden.

Before you can even start forming the federation you'll need some [#b38dff]Credit[#ffffff] and enough [#b38dff]Influence[#ffffff] with a few races. A humble suggestion is to get started on both by doing the friendly act of [#b38dff]delivering spacefaring tech[#ffffff] to the Skylaxians, [#fb9702]Andors[#ffffff], and/or Peltians, and then run some [#b38dff]dispatch missions[#ffffff] for them to gain more credit.

If you want to read this (or any other) message again, just click [#b38dff]Your Logbook[#ffffff].
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Enrymion

Apr 12, 2014 3:03 pm

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solarmapintro.jpg (80,040 bytes)   
solarmapintro.jpg (80,040 bytes)   

Enrymion

Apr 12, 2014 3:06 pm

reporter   ~0035838

Though I'm not sure about the "Before you can even start forming the federation" part, maybe "In order to create the federation" would be better

Issue History

Date Modified Username Field Change
Apr 12, 2014 3:03 pm Enrymion New Issue
Apr 12, 2014 3:03 pm Enrymion File Added: solarmapintro.jpg
Apr 12, 2014 3:06 pm Enrymion Note Added: 0035838
Apr 14, 2014 9:28 am Chris_McElligottPark Category Suggestion - General Idea => Suggestion - General
Apr 14, 2014 9:30 am Chris_McElligottPark Category Suggestion - General => Suggestion