0027779: First List of Typos and Grammatical Errors - DEV Arcen

ID	Project	Category		Date Submitted	Last Update

0027779	Heart Of The Machine	GUI		Apr 26, 2023 2:01 pm	Apr 27, 2023 4:52 am

Reporter	Mac	Assigned To	ZeusAlmighty
Status	resolved	Resolution	fixed
Product Version	0.300 Initial Tester Version

Summary	0027779: First List of Typos and Grammatical Errors
Description	---General--- Most of the spacing after punctuation is usually double spaces after periods, but there's a decent few where there's only a single space. Might be worth making everything uniform, as it can stand out quite a bit if both forms are in the same tooltip. ---Unit Descriptions--- Assistive Nanoswarm: It's using disperse as a descriptor, but "disperse" is a verb. A better description would be "dispersed so sparsely" Liquefactor Nanoswarm: Again, disperse is being used as if it was a synonym for sparse/thin etc. Riot Predator: Description ends with "This is a bit less effective at first," Not sure if this was meant to be a period and a full sentence, or if it was actually cut off. Scattercrwaler: Uses "experts that with teleportation capabilities." Remove "that." Cyborg Gatherer: Try to avoid starting a sentence with "But." Leech: "...deeply unsettling to humans as well as highly skilled..." suggest changing "as well as" to ", but" considering we're going from a negative trait to a positive. Combat Leech: I suggest breaking up the sentences. "About the size of a small bird, and highly (or change to well) armed. It's small lasers are capable of cutting through enemies in alarming fashion." Ghost Runner: Rearrange the first sentence. "Support unit that looks from a distance" to either "Support unit that, from a distance, looks" or "Support unit that looks like a human in full body armor when seen at a distance." ---Notifications--- Death Nears: "Things will get more difficulty" > "difficult" put "permanently" somewhere else to avoid breaking up the sentence too much. Like "but things will permanently become more difficult after that, if you do."
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Date Modified	Username	Field	Change
Apr 26, 2023 2:01 pm	Mac	New Issue
Apr 26, 2023 7:43 pm	Chris_McElligottPark	Assigned To	=> ZeusAlmighty
Apr 26, 2023 7:43 pm	Chris_McElligottPark	Status	new => assigned
Apr 27, 2023 4:52 am	ZeusAlmighty	Status	assigned => resolved
Apr 27, 2023 4:52 am	ZeusAlmighty	Resolution	open => fixed
Apr 27, 2023 4:52 am	ZeusAlmighty	Note Added: 0067597