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IDProjectCategoryLast Update
0027779Heart Of The MachineGUIApr 27, 2023 4:52 am
ReporterMac Assigned ToZeusAlmighty  
Status resolvedResolutionfixed 
Product Version0.300 Initial Tester Version 
Summary0027779: First List of Typos and Grammatical Errors
Description---General---

Most of the spacing after punctuation is usually double spaces after periods, but there's a decent few where there's only a single space. Might be worth making everything uniform, as it can stand out quite a bit if both forms are in the same tooltip.

---Unit Descriptions---

Assistive Nanoswarm: It's using disperse as a descriptor, but "disperse" is a verb. A better description would be "dispersed so sparsely"

Liquefactor Nanoswarm: Again, disperse is being used as if it was a synonym for sparse/thin etc.

Riot Predator: Description ends with "This is a bit less effective at first," Not sure if this was meant to be a period and a full sentence, or if it was actually cut off.

Scattercrwaler: Uses "experts that with teleportation capabilities." Remove "that."

Cyborg Gatherer: Try to avoid starting a sentence with "But."

Leech: "...deeply unsettling to humans as well as highly skilled..." suggest changing "as well as" to ", but" considering we're going from a negative trait to a positive.

Combat Leech: I suggest breaking up the sentences. "About the size of a small bird, and highly (or change to well) armed. It's small lasers are capable of cutting through enemies in alarming fashion."

Ghost Runner: Rearrange the first sentence. "Support unit that looks from a distance" to either "Support unit that, from a distance, looks" or "Support unit that looks like a human in full body armor when seen at a distance."


---Notifications---

Death Nears: "Things will get more difficulty" > "difficult" put "permanently" somewhere else to avoid breaking up the sentence too much. Like "but things will permanently become more difficult after that, if you do."
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ZeusAlmighty

Apr 27, 2023 4:52 am

manager   ~0067597

*Fixed typos and some double spacing.
**Thanks to Mac for spotting these

My first mantis ticket resolved for HotM!

Issue History

Date Modified Username Field Change
Apr 26, 2023 2:01 pm Mac New Issue
Apr 26, 2023 7:43 pm Chris_McElligottPark Assigned To => ZeusAlmighty
Apr 26, 2023 7:43 pm Chris_McElligottPark Status new => assigned
Apr 27, 2023 4:52 am ZeusAlmighty Status assigned => resolved
Apr 27, 2023 4:52 am ZeusAlmighty Resolution open => fixed
Apr 27, 2023 4:52 am ZeusAlmighty Note Added: 0067597