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| ID | Project | Category | Date Submitted | Last Update | |
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| 0014638 | The Last Federation | GUI | Apr 25, 2014 6:40 pm | Apr 30, 2014 12:09 pm | |
| Reporter | windgen | Assigned To | Chris_McElligottPark | ||
| Status | resolved | Resolution | fixed | ||
| Product Version | 1.005 Beta (Holy Smokes It's Big) | ||||
| Fixed in Version | 1.009 (Merging Beta Branch With Official) | ||||
| Summary | 0014638: Bad grammar in advanced start text | ||||
| Description | Existing text reads: "If this is your first time playing, we strongly advise you do a Quick Start, however." The grammar of the text is questionable (at best). I suggest this re-wording: "However, if this is your first time playing, we strongly advise using Quick Start instead." | ||||
| Tags | No tags attached. | ||||
| Internal Weight | New | ||||
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More advanced start screen text issues: The tooltips for Normal and Hard are missing the word "has". "Your flagship 2x the usual health". The starting year text could also be improved. My suggested rewording: "The solar date for the beginning of the game. In later years, more advanced technology is unlocked for research, and more defensive turrets and civilian outposts will be present in battles." |
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Thanks for all of those! |
| Date Modified | Username | Field | Change |
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| Apr 25, 2014 6:40 pm | windgen | New Issue | |
| Apr 25, 2014 6:53 pm | windgen | Note Added: 0036799 | |
| Apr 30, 2014 12:09 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Internal Weight | => New |
| Apr 30, 2014 12:09 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Note Added: 0037064 | |
| Apr 30, 2014 12:09 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Status | new => resolved |
| Apr 30, 2014 12:09 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Fixed in Version | => 1.009 (Merging Beta Branch With Official) |
| Apr 30, 2014 12:09 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Resolution | open => fixed |
| Apr 30, 2014 12:09 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Assigned To | => Chris_McElligottPark |
