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IDProjectCategoryLast Update
0017999Starward RogueSuggestionJan 22, 2016 8:35 am
ReporterChris_McElligottPark Assigned ToChris_McElligottPark  
Status resolvedResolutionfixed 
Fixed in Version0.970 
Summary0017999: Narrative issues (Bluddy)
DescriptionEven though the intro has been improved to give more direction, I'm still unclear on my motivation. Why am I here? What is there to be found here? Why am I fighting these enemies? In Isaac, I'm escaping my mom into the dungeon. In Nuclear Throne, I'm fighting to reach the nuclear throne. In FTL, I'm delivering a secret message to the federation (and for some reason when I get there I'm the only one who can fight the big boss). There's some text about saving the universe, but what does that mean? The universe is about to end anyway. And how is fighting some ships in some spaceship going to do anything about the universe? There's no connection there, and therefore no motivation.
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related to 0017894 resolvedChris_McElligottPark New Intro Idea 
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related to 0018421 resolvedChris_McElligottPark OK button drawn over text on story screen 11 of 11 

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Chris_McElligottPark

Jan 22, 2016 8:35 am

administrator   ~0044603

Thanks!

* The existing intro story, which has nothing to do with anything anymore, has been removed. The tutorial actually has the intro story in it now (thanks to those who suggested it), although as noted that's not fully implemented just yet.

Issue History

Date Modified Username Field Change
Dec 16, 2015 4:12 pm Chris_McElligottPark New Issue
Jan 20, 2016 5:56 pm Chris_McElligottPark Relationship added related to 0017894
Jan 20, 2016 5:56 pm Chris_McElligottPark Relationship added related to 0017830
Jan 20, 2016 5:58 pm Chris_McElligottPark Assigned To => Chris_McElligottPark
Jan 20, 2016 5:58 pm Chris_McElligottPark Status new => assigned
Jan 22, 2016 2:07 am Chris_McElligottPark Relationship added related to 0018421
Jan 22, 2016 8:35 am Chris_McElligottPark Note Added: 0044603
Jan 22, 2016 8:35 am Chris_McElligottPark Status assigned => resolved
Jan 22, 2016 8:35 am Chris_McElligottPark Fixed in Version => 0.970
Jan 22, 2016 8:35 am Chris_McElligottPark Resolution open => fixed