0021835: Weird wording for Devourer Golem Description in Game setup

ID	Project	Category		Date Submitted	Last Update

0021835	AI War 2	GUI		Oct 17, 2019 11:44 pm	Oct 18, 2019 12:07 pm

Reporter	Ovalcircle	Assigned To	RocketAssistedPuffin
Status	resolved	Resolution	fixed
Product Version	0.953 Hotfixes For Certain Linux + Hardware Combinations
Fixed in Version	0.954 Hacking Log!

Summary	0021835: Weird wording for Devourer Golem Description in Game setup
Description	"The nigh-indestructible Devourer Golem makes its way slowly around the galaxy, *absorbing all of mobile military forces* it finds in order to power and repair itself." "Absorbing all of mobile military forces" doesn't sound right. Maybe change "all of" to "any"? Or put a "the" in between "of" and "mobile".
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Date Modified	Username	Field	Change
Oct 17, 2019 11:44 pm	Ovalcircle	New Issue
Oct 17, 2019 11:44 pm	Ovalcircle	File Added: 20191017233327_1.jpg
Oct 18, 2019 12:07 pm	RocketAssistedPuffin	Assigned To	=> RocketAssistedPuffin
Oct 18, 2019 12:07 pm	RocketAssistedPuffin	Status	new => resolved
Oct 18, 2019 12:07 pm	RocketAssistedPuffin	Resolution	open => fixed
Oct 18, 2019 12:07 pm	RocketAssistedPuffin	Fixed in Version	=> 0.954 Hacking Log!
Oct 18, 2019 12:07 pm	RocketAssistedPuffin	Note Added: 0053780

Ovalcircle Oct 17, 2019 11:44 pm reporter	20191017233327_1.jpg (88,792 bytes) 20191017233327_1.jpg (88,792 bytes)

RocketAssistedPuffin Oct 18, 2019 12:07 pm reporter ~0053780	Added "the". Thanks yet again.